J&B Blue Program (Independent Study Papers-ISSCY)“Researching the ‘So What?’ Factors of Dual Diagnoses” Highlights: J&B collaborated with the client to create a 1,800-word research paper and a 475-word proposal for the ISSCY research competition involving thirty scholarly sources. ISSCY published the client’s paper. J&B split the project down into five steps, where J&B presented the client with a detailed outline and a series of edits and revisions to polish their drafts. J&B also created an outline for the client’s research proposal and helped the client express the key elements of their research with clarity and precision. As the client engaged in active research and paid close attention to expressing the “So what?” component of their research, J&B worked with the client providing sample sources and detailed suggestions to better express the relevance of the client’s research. The Topic:J&B worked with the client to compose a research paper and proposal for the ISSCY research competition. The client’s research was in-depth and utilized thirty scholarly sources, including experimental studies, journal articles, and reputable news sources. J&B assisted the client in creating a 1,800-word paper and 475-word proposal that helped the client further develop their interest in their topic. The client’s research paper was published by ISSCY. The Process:J&B worked with the client as a three-person team and broke the project down into five steps. During these steps, J&B provided the client with a detailed outline which the client utilized to create their first draft. J&B worked back-and-forth in a series of revisions with the client to remove any repetitive language, include proper citations, and ensure that the paper’s word count met ISSCY’s requirements. J&B also worked carefully to create a detailed outline for the client’s proposal, which J&B helped the client narrow down to address the key points of their research paper without excessive language. At the end of the project, the client produced a research paper with an abstract, literature review, methodology, and conclusion sections and a proposal that conveyed the relevance of their research. Writing Style:Throughout the project, the client expressed an interest in active research and addressing the “So what?” component of their paper. J&B provided sample sources for the client to help the client express the relationships between the key concepts in their paper, which the client incorporated into their drafts. The client also shared their goals of clearly expressing their ideas and consistently referring back to their thesis as they wrote, which J&B helped the client achieve by reviewing their analyses and offering detailed suggestions. Throughout the project’s five steps, J&B collaborated with the client to present their research clearly and logically, paying special attention to the implications of their project on future research. J&B’s Key Goals: In-depth research Outlining research goals Expressing the project’s relevance Detailed editing and revising Evaluation: Strengths: The client maintained clarity and a direct purpose throughout the paper. They directed the content of the paper to emphasize the impact of peer recovery on mental illnesses consistently and successfully throughout the essay. Additionally, the client utilized clear, concise language that was appropriate for the tone of the essay. The client was able to refer their analyses back to their thesis as they wrote while maintaining the structure of the essay. Overall, the client displayed a strong sense of cohesion throughout the editing/writing process. Weaknesses: The client occasionally used the passive, rather than active voice as they wrote. The client also displayed difficulties utilizing block quotes. For future essays, we recommend practicing using longer quotes in block quote format, while referring to this source to help distinguish between the active and passive voice: https://www.grammarly.com/blog/active-vs-passive-voice/. Furthermore, to diversify their language, we recommend using a thesaurus when writing future essays to help guide word choices: https://www.thesaurus.com. 위 사례를 한국어로 확인 하기